 the naked civil servant 2006-02-04 . chapter 1wow this has actually been on my favourites list for a millenia but i have never reviewed it :S. i think the reason may be that i am completely incapable of expressing the ** AWE. i love this poem. i do, and i cannot explain it. instead, i will quote back at you in the vain but crystalline hope that, rereading them, you will understand the insane and unreserved genius of your work. all you work.
(you told me – four-letter wordskill dandelions -)
i don’t know how i fit into this picture
as i am so quiet lately.
but you see,
i own this gun
and i named her lily.
but you know what – i’m unhinged and i just think
you don’t even deserve to be a proper noun.
(i suppose i don’t mean that)
thank you. so much. |