very well written. I appreciate the reviews and would like to state that its true that a lot of people at my school are sluts and outgoing, but I am not the former and only sometimes the latter...

Pretty good. I would imagine that these are the kinds of thoughts that would pass through my head if I was in this person's place. Great job at looking at things from another point of view!

it was a good poem, although i kept trying to figure out what it was a metaphor for while i was reading it. once i got to the note at the bottom, it would have made more sense except i was too confused about what it was about to remember it. so i read it again and it was better.

This is good. Thank you for telling the inspiration otherwise it would have been very confusing. This is good. I like the perspective. Keep it up.