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Getuie 2006-05-18 ch 9,	abuseA friend of mine recommended this story to me... It's amazing. So well thought out and beautifully written. Well done. I got so absorbed in the story, I was sad to see it end. Just... fantastic.
KimHua 2006-05-13 ch 5,	abuseThoroughly enjoying this. I especially appreciate that it actually takes time to pick locks!
Manna Banana 2006-04-03 ch 8,	abuseI absolutely love this story. it is so juat amazing. how life can happen like that under the most unlikely odds. it reminds me of a song...
andy-hodges 2005-11-26 ch 9,	abusefigured i would mention http://w.lulu.com/ a self-publishing site. it's free. up to you. just figured it would be cool to have a copy in print.
wickedstarr42 2005-07-22 ch 9,	abuseaw, bless ya! lol, i'm about to go read some stuff now, but that was just cute... l8r chick!
Casey Drake 2005-07-20 ch 9,	abusebows thinks oops. curtseys you're welcome.:)CD
The wocket in your pocket 2005-07-19 ch 9,	abuseCelyn. I salute you. This was quite possibly one of the best stories I have ever read. This story should be made into a novel and published, so incredible is the story. Everything you wrote seemed so real and so probable that I felt like I was reading Frank Herbert. Incredible feat of writing. I'mg now going to go back to what im supposed to be doing and check out more of you later. R&R Vengeance: Lune plz.
DarkerLink 2005-07-05 ch 8,	abuseO.o ...wow... I started it, and couldnt stop reading! The concept was really well thought up, and although it is short, it has everything anyone would need. The ending pulls it together, and how in a world of technological advancement (although it doesnt seem that way in the lower levels lol) everybody craves a bit of natural beauty!!
Mad Aristocrat 2005-06-06 ch 1,	abuseQuite interesting!! The little girls were so cute! I liked the part with the plants and the image of the woman. Made me wonder. I also liked the descriptions of the cities and how you kind of cut it up in to levels. I love when things are organized like that. Also how the rest of the city dumped on the lower level - That was cool. Again, love the organizatioin. I'll be sure to read more soon. I'm in school right now and bells about to ring so yeah... If it's not to much to ask could you possibly check out my story. Eh...I accidently repeated a line in one of the paragraphs - sorry about that ahead of time. I'm going to upload a new story soon too, hope you read that too. Glad I have good stuff to read now.
Majestics-Ghost 2005-05-22 ch 8,	abuseHiyas, (yeah I did just joint o put this review). Told you I was going to read it :) Loved the story, very well done, I'll be completely honest and say it blew me away, I was expecting to read a chapter or two today, and so on over the week, but couldnt stop reading :D. It is such a strange tale, an unbelieveable idea (especially the last two chapters), which works very well, and is written well enough that you can believe it really happening. A Brilliant Story. Thank you for telling me about it.
wickedstarr42 2005-05-16 ch 8,	abuseso i guess that's the end, huh? dunno, it's not the most conventional story, but i like it. i think, being at stratford, i have developed a taste for the abstract. yay! mike and zoe got together! and i liked that jerei found someone as well. it's a nice story. and it does make u feel all warm and fuzzy inside. and really powerful ending, as well, i think. keep writing! l8r babe!
wickedstarr42 2005-05-15 ch 7,	abuseaw! yay! i love it! jerei's going to be a mommy! and i love that zoe gets all reunited with her family! and the suspense with like, all the Level 150 police comin to get em! yikes! way good stuf babe. sorry i havnt been able to review for a while. i'm still behind on hw, let alone fp... kiss kiss! keep up the goods
Ender351 2005-05-14 ch 8,	abuseHey! This is Ender. I liked the ending. Nice and simple at the end and I'm sure many people are finally cheering that Zoe and Jerei have finally hooked up. And yes, Ender is from Orson Scott Card's wonderful creations. applaudes I'm happy you knew that. Bu tell me, did you stop after Ender's Game or did you finish the series?
trillionagesprout 2005-05-12 ch 8, anon.	abuseDude, seriously, this was the most awesome story ever. I feel like planting a tree now... sniffle :P
andy-hodges 2005-05-09 ch 8,	abuseI loved your story. You should look into getting it published.

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