Separation can be a boomer at times but life goes on.And sure you may cry crocodile tears, but it all good.Stop! feeling sorry for yourself, once you get over it. He’ll come to his senses.

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it's a really sweet poem

I know the feeling...nice work

beautiful and sad. waiting for the one to love to, perhaps, return. such a hard situation. very nicely penned, you have a talent. keep developing it! keep on written~~ *kimber*

Very nice job. I loved it, I thought it was beautiful. KEep up the good work,

beautiful.. I love it

Aw that was so sweet! Sad but sweet! I loved it. But I have two request of you - One is please whenever you can please check out my tenth chapter of "Behind Kaiti Yotsu" and two is please whenever you have time UPDATE YOUR STORY! Okay that all for me - and again very cute poem.

bad chic: this is the first review i ever reviewed for fiction.co so be happy that you get itsexy chic: that was some good stuff.. i liked it alot!bad chic: it was intense! and for that i'll put it on my fave stories list!

Wow. That was really good ...