wow...you and I seem so similar in terms of what we write-Great piece...love the imagery of the tightrope-quite effective! Beautiful stuff!Once again...consider this on my list of faves that I can no longer add too!

aw, the feeling of cold isolation was wonderfully portrayed. The poem was strong throughout, but my favorite section would have to be the first one. I feel like I can relate, the whole friends thing, and then maybe more? And suddenly they disappear for a while(?)... At least that's what I interpreted. "The look in your eyes made my heart sing"... Oh i know the feeling. Excellent, write on! .