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| randomunknown 2005-05-02 ch 1,  | abuseNow I think i'm going mad. Again I read the poem. Then just the first lines, then just the second an so on... and there's now five awesome poems! I love the imagery. another great piece of work. |
| thenewromantic 2005-04-08 ch 1, | abuseMaybe not the same as a house party, but hey! Just to say wow, this is a really great 50th poem (50?! woah...) Beautiful verse and rhymthm and rhyme and I love the way you carry the theme throughout. I can really relate to it. Great job! |
| roselilie 2005-02-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is very good...I really don't what more to say except I REALLY LIKE IT...I also like how you make something destructive to something wonderful...Keep it up! |
| Eirien 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, I like the transition from the negative, bitter first stanzas to the more positive last ones. It's true, there is restorative power in nature, but unfortunately only up to a certain point. |
| Kellandra 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abusethat is very powerful poem. like the repetition of me at the end of the stanzas |