I love your poem! It rocks!! The words are beautiful and reach into the soul. It has a kick-in-the-pants kind of reality message and the line at the end is a clincher.

It leaves the reader with a lasting impression of what the poet has gone through, and the poem really relates to a lot of people and their situations. It is excellent and shows not great potential but actual greatness. This poem has the voice of someone much older than their years.

Keep writing. You're a wonderful, brilliant, insightful reconteur. The highest compliment I could give you?

I wish I'd written this poem.

Orient Fox

Love your line: Just because there is a scarDoesn’t mean I will not bleed.

Totally know how you feel, I can feel the pain