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| Halcyon Impulsion 2006-06-07 ch 1,  | abuseThis is good work. Keep it up. This is my favorite part: A place always sunnyAlways sunset I'm a sucker for contradiction :) |
| Kira Deleria 2005-07-08 ch 1, | abuseOh my Goodness you read the whole thing!?! lol I expected you to give up at like the third chapter, I'm so sorry you had to suffer through the longnity! Love this poem by the way, very pretty. Thank you for the review and thank you thank you for reading all that. I can feel your out of breathness...*gets u a drink* lol I'm glad you liked Pureheart, its basically my love and my life. Thank you again. |
| dreaming 2005-06-23 ch 1, anon. | abusedreaming makes me tired |
| Em 2005-06-23 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was really good! day dreaming is the best thing (i mean thang) in the world! |
| laurenzo 2005-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abusenice. makes me dream as though my life's carefree...heh, i wish! |
| Luckie 2005-03-20 ch 1, | abuse"A private vision beneath your eyelids"... You know, I've never thought of it that way before. Someone finally got me to think today! Awesome job, sugar. This poem kick your mom's butt! |
| Siberian-Tigress 2005-03-16 ch 1, | abuseIt sounds like a truely wonderful place to spend sometime. |
| purpleblack-antelope 2005-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, that was beautiful! I have a place kinda like that also, only darker. You wrote this for school?! Wow. That is amazing! |
| bee 2005-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abusebreat again u know i meant poem by the way lol im so stupid |
| kijochan 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abuseIt's lovely. It's full of light-heartedness and fun, I absolutely love your dream world. :) |
| IrishLover 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abusewhy write about peter pan sounds great with out him keep writing ;) maybe next time without peter pan |