this was an amazing poem, good imagery and word choice, i love the formatting. Did you mean to make justbaked one word? Just wondering, because if you didn't you might want to check it out, there really is absolutely nothing to improve on. Amazing work.

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brilliant - i love the last verse

im not even sure what to say. but its great.

I like the tone here and the broken imagery.

This is just an amazing piece. I love the part about wine. This is just an exquisite poem! I'm definately adding you to my favorite authors.

ohmygod.

you're my favorite.

i'm adding you to my authors.&amazing.i loved it.

i liked this. it was good. brings out some emotion.

martha stewart? lol. no, really, vividly eerie but somehow heartbreaking.