wow... the beginning made me think of a happy friendship poem but it was a lot deepr and coller than that

"It's just a waist of time," should be "It's just a *waste* of time." Also, I know I'm picky, but for consistency, you might have changed 4 to four, since thirteen was spelled out. Other than that, I love the message and the feeling behind it. Great work.

You are an amazing poet. Sorry..but I have to go. Otherwise I'd write a longer review. Keep up the good work!Hawke

I absolutely love this poem! It's so beautifully and yet so sad. It's good to be yourself and realize that in order to be happy you have to be yourself! :)

i like this but, its sad that you're ending the friendship or well trying to anyway...i like it but i guess you just have to find ur own identity...i love it. lots of love AllyCred