Very beautiful and emotional. Your grammar is excellent, too. My only suggestion would be to not put it under 'essay' as it's obviously a piece of descriptive creative writing. Keep it up!

Ah, Sad and Hopeful. I really like this, it makes me really sad. I like these better then your FanFictions. *Pat-Pat*

This is a very fine peice of work, you should show off your talent more. I love how you describe each subject: light, dark and a voice... you describe their meanings to you and that is what made this essay great, you expressed your emotions and said how you felt. Great work. I hope to see more from you.

~William~

hey, nice work, I care, keep it up, i'm looking forward to your work.

Wow. Deep and thought provoking. The wording is good and it runs smoothly. Well written. I like this one. :)