I love how this was written from a third party prespective, or from the guy's point of view.

I love every single thing about this poem...from the words you used...and I tried to pick a favorite line, but I couldn't.

I love you, that is all.

*checks two boxes underneath review box*

i can relate.. beautiful

Very well written, very good, and quite powerful. Good job, thanks for the review.

interesting. Your thoughts are quite scattered in this poem which makes it a bit hard to read, but the overall theme is decent. You write like a person who definately got their heart broken, and for that I am sorry. I've only read three so far so you might have more on another topic...i hope so because a broken heart is certainly not all there is to write about, and i've found that writing about hurt is ok once, but more than once makes it harder to get over. anyway...kudos.

really great job. i love it :-)

I absolutely love the first line of this poem. In its entirety, the mood of dejectedness yet hopefulness is so beautiful. I especially appreciate your use of popular aphorisms. "Now that misery's found its company..." Great poem.

..::Sophie::..

awesome... and it is very good, how dare you put down your work like that?!hehehe... but it's an excellent poem, i'm impressed.