Surprising. Most poems of this style and length aren't really this expressive. It's simple, but I get it. Nice job.

nice

Hey I'm back to annoy you with many positive reviews again :-D Thi is really. So much emotion and easy to read. Really good-Keith Andrew

Wow, its so short but so...nice. Very good job!

~Always, saeo

Nice try, but this is not a poem. This is a garble sentence that you somehow stretched into six lines to try and convince yourself that you can write poetry. Back to school for you.