I still love this one. :-) Though, um, you never do mention what postal, scorpian, et. al. are supposed to do during the briefing. Dunno if that was intentional or not.
JaveHarron 2005-05-23 . chapter 1
Pretty cool story here! It seems like you've combined Top Gun and Star Wars Episode 4 here.
that didnt seem too suicidal to me...only two postals were killed and one disabled. Anyways, good chapter, but I got to agree with Master Chief on this one.
I fear to ask why you've re-posted TNE... seeing as it's supposed to be this huge part of a later section in WOA... i'm baffled. Not much has changed since the last incarnation save for the names, the eye's capabilities, and the mention of tsunami... u bastard, give us what we really want! (another chapter in WOA)