whew... speechless in a good way, love it :)

Nice poem. Hoever, isn't it else, not els?

No quite sure what to say to it, except it was beautiful, and heartwrenching. Kinda left me speachless t.t

Great poem! It's on my favorite list. But I really think your secert is out now...

hey, this is good. It's very personal and, you know, something that happened to you. I love it when people write about something that has happened to them. Its kind of funny. Sorry, if i sent you a thank you email. I'll try to remember not to do that. thanks for the cool writing.

This is very catchy. I like the whole premise of this piece. ^_^ It makes you think about what goes on between friends when they become really close. *claps with standing ovation*

This was a nice poem, only because it is so true how this type of thing can easily happen. I liked how you were able to rhyme the poem. It needs a few words

good use of rhyme

You have an absolutely amazing way of writing. I'm adoring every line, as the image is painted within my mind. Thank you for writing such beautiful poetry. Thank you for such beautiful words.The world no longer seems so ugly.

Really good, the continual reminder of your friend asleep works really well to remind the reader that it's secret. The ryhme scheme also works really well, good poem.

I love this poem one of my favourites I've read although I can't quite tell you why.

I love the emotion put into this. It's a kind of prickling at the base of my neck; I want to wince at the pure regret.

wow.. you have good storytelling writing...good job..:) nice poem.. :)

Whoa! This is really good.

whew! on the subject matter: ouch, man! the poem was really well written, though-thrilling despite the fact that I didn't want to be thrilled by it... good job