That was a really good story! And rotting flesh always gets to me. *shuddER*

Wow... that was... I don't even know how to describe it... wow... (I don't mean it in a bad way)

Spelling and grammar problems slow this down a little, but the story is very good. Always remember, writing mechanics are always something you can work on, you can't practice getting ideas for stories. This story was a great idea. Nice job, keep writing.

**Slave**

*shudders* This was very creepy, and I did for most of it think "eww" BUT I loved the twist at the end, hehe, it works really well *hugs* Great mini Story here!

luvsx

OMG!! That was so cool!! Good job!!