OMFG!Chelly this is HYSTERICAL! I'm pretty sure I've read it before... but it still makes me laugh! I'm gonna share it with my dad right now! :-P

lol... i love this so much, you have no idea... it's so great! :-P

go lone cow-sheep thing! i was rooting for it all along! lol! :) :) :)

It's so clever and it made me laugh! Props to you!

Hah thats great! It reminds me of "Boundin'", the little short movie fomr "The Incredibles"...

Fantastic job! I loved it!

~Always, Saeo

This however fun, is actually really quite well written. It has a good flow to it and an inbuilt ability to keep your reader hooked to the end.

Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

You're welcome to check out some of my work if you like, your thoughts would be very appreciated.