Very good, I wish I could rhyme in my poems:( oh well. It kinda reminded me of 'what is this feeling' from wicked. Haha!

wow... true... love and hate are very close in characteristics! that's why some people wind up falling in love with each other when they hate each other! :-Dyour poem is refreshing

i agree... i enjoy the way it implies the whole time you're talking about love... it REALLY DOES show how similar and closely related love and hate are

i love that last stanza. it makes the reader realize how similar love and hate are. :] favorite story