|Reviews for Marks|
| Eirien 4/21/05 . chapter 1
The rhymes and rhythm and the short lines accentuate powerfully the sad and touching message of this poem. Really well written.
| FeelThePenPrick 3/10/05 . chapter 1
hmm... you know, you should try saftey pins, they leave smaller marks... very deep. very good. KEEP UP ZEE GOOD WORK!
| Strawberry Wish 3/1/05 . chapter 1
Very powerful. Love it. )
| shadow-spirit 2/28/05 . chapter 1
this flows so well i realy like the way you put it together with the short lines and even rymes etc it realy drives its point home, lovely