   Nature's Glory 2007-05-16 . chapter 3Wait what? |
| Nature's Glory 2007-05-16 . chapter 2 Heh, this made me chuckle. The guy is named Ashley? It'd be funny to see him go to MY school with that name... |
| Nature's Glory 2007-05-16 . chapter 1 Don't give up on this, it could be really good. |
 J.M.Collins 2005-06-23 . chapter 2Hm, I like the opening passage. could be something funny to build your charactors on in future books. Looks good. This dialogue WOULD be funny if you incorporated it into a story. Here, in the midst of your scraps, I think it may be going to waste.
its god. -James. remember, it is the phlegm that binds us |
| J.M.Collins 2005-06-23 . chapter 1 Hm...kinda makes you wonder WHY the main charactor calls him master? *Eh, Tally? whats the sitch here?*
Other than that, its a good piece of writing. it lacks some distinguishing features though, like a description of the charactors, or the scenery. But I guess you dont really need that for a scrap of a story, ne? |
 Mayaj 2005-06-22 . chapter 11AWSOME!! On a whole different vein of the rest of the stuff we've been doing today, but I love it! |
 Dying Without Gackt 2005-06-22 . chapter 11That was pretty good!! I liked how uplifting it was. Very interesting indeed.
Hey!! I update Behind Kaiti Yotsu (finally) please don't forget to review.
^^ |
 Poppy Pyres 2005-06-22 . chapter 11XD "Horse excrement"haha.Rather profound dialogue. I like it. Really do. |
| Dying Without Gackt 2005-05-08 . chapter 8 AY KAWAII! That was so cute! ^-^ I really thought was adorable. I keep thinking 'AW'. Makes me smile. Loved it!! |
| Dying Without Gackt 2005-05-03 . chapter 10 Arg. Now I know what I really hate about scraps - They're just that! Scraps. I always want more.
(Sigh)
Well. It was interesting nonetheless. Jealous, jealous Phabian!! |
| Dying Without Gackt 2005-05-02 . chapter 9 ...Hahahahahahah! LMFAO! You were right - I really did enjoy that. How did you know?! Oh...er...I didn't read the 8th scrap yet...I was just looking at the author notes (I do that a lot) and I saw my name...so I had to read this first. I'll read the 8th after I read the tenth. Eh weird. But yeah I loved this. Haha...so that's what I am...a faghag! Haha FAGAHAGS ROCK! Phew he was joking. I really wouldn't have said anything if he was - but the way he like attacked him at first. Too hilarous!! |
| Dying Without Gackt 2005-05-02 . chapter 7 Situation huh. I loved this! Yaoi goodness. Never too many doses of that. So...did you blush when writing this chapter oh so long ago. Actually you do all of the romance stuff pretty well. I pat your back! Again...loved this. Anything with shonen-ai or yaoi - I am doomed to love. |
| Poppy Pyres 2005-05-02 . chapter 10 this is so innocent in many ways- even chapter 9 |
| Poppy Pyres 2005-05-02 . chapter 9 AHEM... |
| Poppy Pyres 2005-05-02 . chapter 8 The tea lady is definitely awesome. Maybe I could use her asa random character somewhere... and i could make her really eccentric. She is the kind of woman who had 100's of cats |
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