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| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-03-27 ch 1,  | abuseI like the repetition of "tempted" and about how you want to satisfy the razor, not yourself like most people would have portrayed this as. i disagree with the last two lines though, i think you'd be brave not to go through with this, so i took that as irony, good work x weasel within x |
| Normality's Mistake 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abusethanx for the review I like this poem a lot cgreat work |
| roselilie 2005-03-01 ch 1, | abuseGood poem...the only cc I have is that u could have used stronger adjectives...besides that great poem. Keep it up! |
| peaceman4ever 2005-02-27 ch 1, | abusenice poes...once i felt like this waht your poem was aying...hey..oncei was a teenage...lol...well any ways good jobs |
| incandescent.smiles 2005-02-27 ch 1, | abuseI like this... the ending was a *little* off beat but hey, that doesn't matter it was a great poem anyway! ~leila* |