I like the repetition of "tempted" and about how you want to satisfy the razor, not yourself like most people would have portrayed this as. i disagree with the last two lines though, i think you'd be brave not to go through with this, so i took that as irony, good work x weasel within x

thanx for the review I like this poem a lot cgreat work

Good poem...the only cc I have is that u could have used stronger adjectives...besides that great poem. Keep it up!

nice poes...once i felt like this waht your poem was aying...hey..oncei was a teenage...lol...well any ways good jobs

I like this... the ending was a *little* off beat but hey, that doesn't matter it was a great poem anyway!

~leila*