i know that i say the same thing a lot but that was good. it was disturbing in a comforting way...

wow really good poem!

Some what dark and beautiful. I like it.

i enjoyed reading the poem, it feels rather like romanticism except that there isn't much of plot line-not that that's bad, the words flow nicely, have a good feel, some repetition but not too much

Awesome. Good flow, it was very thought provoking! Wonderful.

liked the lines:"Let death steal my breath,Cause me to falter in my dreams..." the imagery created was beautiful, you spoke so much through your words.

Wonderful word choice. This is dark but oddly comforting. New meaning to the phrase 'silent but deadly.'Kudos!

This is good!

Loved your use of images, like "your cloak of black’s depth", which was truly apt!The last stanza was chiling and a little distubing. Nicely done! D

this has made a very strong impression on me, i love it. it's very very good and i'm glad i got to read it.

It was interesting. I can relate to it. O.o;; I really liked the second and last stanzas. Nice.

This is actually a mood I've been in lately, minus the whole death part...sorta like a smile poking through tears. I like the way you made it sound so peaceful.