|Reviews for Sweet Sleep, Forever More|
| The Opposite 7/12/05 . chapter 1
i know that i say the same thing a lot but that was good. it was disturbing in a comforting way...
| Britney04193 5/14/05 . chapter 1
wow really good poem!
| madison-diane 5/1/05 . chapter 1
Some what dark and beautiful. I like it.
| spattered ink 4/18/05 . chapter 1
i enjoyed reading the poem, it feels rather like romanticism except that there isn't much of plot line-not that that's bad, the words flow nicely, have a good feel, some repetition but not too much
| Pharaoh's Wife 4/16/05 . chapter 1
Awesome. Good flow, it was very thought provoking! Wonderful.
| blackoutroses 4/2/05 . chapter 1
liked the lines:"Let death steal my breath,Cause me to falter in my dreams..." the imagery created was beautiful, you spoke so much through your words.
| and calliope said 3/28/05 . chapter 1
Wonderful word choice. This is dark but oddly comforting. New meaning to the phrase 'silent but deadly.'Kudos!
| Gurlchild92 3/25/05 . chapter 1
This is good!
| youzi 3/23/05 . chapter 1
Loved your use of images, like "your cloak of black’s depth", which was truly apt!The last stanza was chiling and a little distubing. Nicely done! D
| Melissa Lea Night 3/7/05 . chapter 1
this has made a very strong impression on me, i love it. it's very very good and i'm glad i got to read it.
| Joewhatever 3/6/05 . chapter 1
It was interesting. I can relate to it. O.o;; I really liked the second and last stanzas. Nice.
| Guest 2/28/05 . chapter 1
This is actually a mood I've been in lately, minus the whole death part...sorta like a smile poking through tears. I like the way you made it sound so peaceful.