Annie darling... you DO write good.This is good! Very good for a first haiku. Only a few suggestions. I think that in the second line you want 'dew glitters like gems in woods-', since dew is kind of already plural unless you say 'a bead of dew' or specify that it's singular like that. Also, in the third line, I think you want 'past' instead of 'pass' since 'pass' is an action verb.Good job! I definitely get the 'feeling' of a cool morning in the woods just as the sun's coming up and the air's still cold and misty... Keep up the good work!~Pont

Hiya, i like it! It's very good - especially for a first haiku :) I like the second line best

**WG