Wow... -falls over- This is awesome! I found a spelling mistake, but other than that, the style, the words, and the overall feel are amazing! Very well written! And I fell over cuz I like this a lot! Great job, mate!Livin' in the SubZero,Tatianna Blusummers

*applauds* Well done.

hey! wow, i really liked this poem! you really wrote it well. The first handfull of lines in the beg. were my favorite! The title was awesome too, def. caught my attention, i prolly wouldnt have ended up reading this if it werent for ur title:D *kw* nice job!

that's really pretty, i like your rhyming it definitely does not make this a childish poem in any way.