I'm not one for reading poems with short lines, but this one intrigued me from the beginning. It was peaceful to read. And the repetition was very good; the poem wouldn't be the same without it.

The repition is too much. The images created were good, but not on par with you other works.

This is such a nice, peaceful poem. Good work.

wow...this is awesome...this is more than a personal statement...its what a poem should convey: the poet's mind and soul...this is exquisite!..lol...sorry i had to say that...but really, good job...i like the references to nature...it added a nice touch...laterz