|Reviews for Chosen Destiny|
| xxbochixx 6/13/10 . chapter 2
Well written! :D Honestly, I'm proud of myself for finding such awesomeness at my first try! I'm new here, and seeing this piece of work, i think I'll be here for a long time. :))
| Doppelganger 2/10/10 . chapter 2
Very good story so far
| Nanshi 11/3/06 . chapter 2
I need to read more! WHY haven't you updated! ROAR!
| Kamijo - Lareine 7/28/06 . chapter 2
I'm liking this story and you've grasped my interest with just 2 chapters and I would love to see an update sometime in the future. I surely hope you haven't given up on this story cause it would be a shame if you did. It's really good so far so I hope you continue with it again someday soon, ne.
| Fellafunk 6/10/06 . chapter 2
This is really good, as all your work is. I understand it's just the begining and I hope you continue it. Well good luck and have fun with whatever you do right now.
| annushka 5/15/06 . chapter 2
I hope that you'll update soon! the storyline is interesting (though it seems a bit more classic than you other story "in god's hands") and it's well written so please, don't abandon that story, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter _
| Kyaroru Fanel 9/23/05 . chapter 2
Wow, I really hope Chapter 3 shows up...this is tasty. _
| k.arnet 7/6/05 . chapter 2
Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it UPDATE PLEASE!
| subtleline 6/23/05 . chapter 2
Please update this soon! I think I'm smitten with this story! The Krist/Falen dynamic is so fun. Esp. with Tyrnan added in to torment unmercifully. They were both attracted at first sight and I would love to see how it grows and Falen convinces Krist that it's mutual and ok b/c let's face it, Krist will b in denial for a while. And then you added in the intrigue with our evil chief and Where is the true Goddess? Please update! I can't wait to see how they solve the sleeping arrangement! PLEASE! *on hands and knees*
| katkle 3/30/05 . chapter 2
I like this even more than the first version, which is saying a lot because I had adored it and hoped you would continue. This time around you've developed a more explicit backstory (or at least let us know about it), and the characterizations are much more personal and real. My only complaint would be that the sexual tension seemed slightly awkward (to me) in the way that it was placed within the prose, but everything else is just too engrossing. Can't wait for more! )
| Silver Scaled Dragon 2/28/05 . chapter 2
Wow, this is a great story - I hope you post the next chapter soon.
| Pixiestyxs1 2/27/05 . chapter 2
Wow I really liked this. Your characters areengaging and I flet like I was actually there. The descriptions of the scenery were amazing and I could tell you put a lot of effort into this chapter. I can't wait for more of this.
| Walter Dash 2/27/05 . chapter 2
I think I'm in love. I must ask if there is a historic precedent for the faradhim that inspired you or is it an idea all your own?
| Lost Chi 2/27/05 . chapter 1
Wow! Great first chapter! I am really going to make sure I keep an eye out for it in the future!
By the way, can anyone please read a story I have on the site. It's called The Pocketwatch. Please read and review. Thank you very much!