Beautiful! This is a great poem. You truly are an incredible writer

Wow, this was very beautiful. I love the way you describe Time, and the whole story line is jsut flat out brilliant. Time reminds me of my character Mistwalker. Btw, thanks for the reviews! Kudos!

beautiful poem, nice rhyming and just lovely! great work! ^-^

Author Note: I have to post a response about the reviews. For some reason FictionPress will not get back with me about the problems I am having about the format. So, the poem looks a tad off. To clear one up...it does rhyme, just not one after the other. Second, the poem is to be read slowly. It's meant to be more of a thinking poem than a "structurally sound poem". I do appreciate the views, any reviews! If I don't get any how am I supposed to know how other people see them? :-) Thank you all for reviewing. I appreciate any insight or feelings about a work.

Blessings to you all.

idea a bit cliched, but can be expanded. why not try not rhyming? i think your poem will flow better.

The description was up to par, but you were trapped by your rhymes. The lines didn't seem to flow smoothly because of them.

*sniffle~snot*... I love this one. It touched the cold snowy parts that usually sit with death and Time, and turned them into something very gentle, with a flowing beauty- still cool- but not distant. This is a good piece!! Very touching. Wonderful stuff! Keep writing... ;-)