Is this a one-shot? Well, your writing is very beautiful...in such a sad and sorrowful way. So, this man killed his love did he? I am perceptive enough to gather that, which I hope is true. That's...that's so sad.

OMG I love how you wrote this first chapter!

Hello, Shamara! I haven't reviewed in such a long time, and I thought it would be time to check back on some of your works. This is simply beautiful, from the introduction all the way to the end of the chapter. The well-placed quote at the beginning really gives a sense of enhancement towards the already beautiful piece, and I love the way that you woven in the italics and emotion into the story. The emotions are raw and powerful and convincing, and the first person perspective you've written in was well-done. The way you set up the entire thing was extremely poetic, and just everything was so beautiful. Very, very good job on this one.

chibichocobo

This is beautiful. The emotionfrom the speaker is raw and really makes an impact on the reader! ^-^ I really enjoyed this! The whole thing really had me creeped out, though also wanting to read Rurouni Kenshi and watch the two OVA's. :P Great job! Do keep it up!

!~* Noelle *~!

This is something that I would come back to read over and over again. I see great promise in this introduction. I cannot wait to see where this tale goes. *nods* I hope to see this updated soon. I love the way you used Italics for the description of the feild. It makes you feel that you are there and only watching from a dreamers point of view. Again, I cannot wait to see where you take it.