oh god if i got this chance i wouldnt miss it for anything

this was very good, it was also true. why be discreet when they give it up for free and don't know it. i have a few more poems up (go to my home page) and i also published some poems for my friends account Goat-bunnie inc. (we're on my faorites list so check there) and he write some really good poems. now he'll review you're stuff to if you review all of his. so please review all of his work and the rest of mine.

-Tha G.0.D.

NICE!! WICKED-AWESOME!!

I like this...opportunities...When there's one available, TAKE IT.

This poem reminds me of a book I read in the sixth grade, called "Bloomability" by Sharon Creech. It's a great book, if a little immature at times. But the girl in the book tends to exaggerate a lot--in the sixth grade, I took every word the main character narrarated as 100% fact. But I read it over again just last week (three years later) and I laughed really hard at things I thought Dinnie was serious about.

Cool. Opportunites rock. I wish I had one to take in this big ole rich town.

Later,

-paige =)

like the point you make here, i don't wnat to sound like a desperate ** but i am so i there is no point beating about the bush but you kind of paid a compliment to me and so can you please please do me a favour and reveiw a poem which is slightly ** (but i like anyway) called jarryig please because it has no reviews and i hate having no reveiws for something (though htis is something you wouldn't know about thank you thank you thank you

so true

very nice. short and too the point. said alot.

SP

Short, and sweet. Nice.