Dangit Kami... I couldn't even read this all in one sitting. I mean, I /could/ have, but there was that bit approaching the end that I... I had to stop. xD

Ack... this story just proves that you're a great author, and one that I MUST ENVY! *clicks favorite story list*

Aw Nodin sounds so cool! What a nice guy! Like me! *strikes a pose* xD No but seriously. Great chapter! Can't wait to read and review chapter 6! Hurry up and review! >

Gone... he was just... gone. That's so sad yet cool. So... Daddys promised Hikari was gonna fly one day... She's gonna fly. She has to! ^-^

o-o What happened to her eyes? They changin color? >> I bet they are! Cool! ^-^ Should I even have this tone of expression while readin this type of story...? >.> Oh well! ^.^

Aw! Let her fly one day! Let 'er do it! I command it Kinneh! >.< ..,Sorry. Spaz attack ^-^ I always hated those moments too. You knew something as going on but you just didn't know what. On to Chapter 3! Woot!

GASP! What are they gonna do to the poor babeh?! GASP!! They gonna kills her?! ...Guess not xD If they did then that would be... quite a short story xD On to Chapter 2! Look for me Kinny! =D

All right. Where shall I start...I like to leave long reviews. You know that. That is why I shall try my very best to do so because every worthy writer deserves one!I do like the way you included the TV announcement and Hikaru's parents into the story, the way it mixed together and kind of felt right. It was also rather amusing, in my black humor sort of way..."Two people were killed in downtown New York today by an unknown poison...did I mention there's a SALE AT THE SMALL TOWN GROCERY STORE?!"Hehe.There seems to be a lot of emphasis in the way the characters talk, which can be good or bad, depending on the reader. Good in the sense that they sound like real people when you write them - possibly bad if the readers find italics annoying if entered occasionally. But hey, you can't please everyone, right?I do like the way the story is coming along - she is finally in her new home, and it is the birth of a new section. A new portion of her life that you should really focus on - the changes of enviroment often means the changes of the person inside. Darwin's theory of natural selection! Adapting...how will Hikaru do, and will she change as a person? :}

(Aka yahiko)

This was definitely a touching chapter... it's unbelievable how Hikari's parents would do that to her.

Anyways, it seems a bit awkward with all the conversations and thinly spread descriptions. It would paint a much better image if you could add in a little more imagery here and there, you know, paint the picture.

What?! Are you TRYING to upset your readers? Argh! -sobs- This isn't the end, is it?! It can't be! Poor Hikari! Why did her parents do this? They must have a reason (or at least they'd better!)! I would just...die if I was put into her position. I'd love to know a bit more about how "special" she is.

Momenti and Take Luck,

-Moony-

What's happening to her? Argh! You have to update. I must know. I like her dad. He's awesome. But what are the parents going to do?

-Moony-

Good job with the suspense. You've really made me want to hear what happened to Hikari.

Please update! I would love to see where this going. I fear I'm already attached to Hikari.

-Moony-

aww, every sweet Kami ^_^ I really enjoyed reading it *claps*

Ah yes, a very interesting chapter. I like how the situation was described. The speaker seems very empathetic to the reader.