aw, this is cute. i really like ur writing style!

I like it. It's intense. I like the repetition, it gives it a nice flow.

-casper

don't think i've ever read a poem on this subject, and that's why i love it- it's creative. Very well written. As for why Sweden- that's where i live. Stockholm, SWeden. I'm american though...

Aww, nice touch. It's light-hearted with some humor, but still deep--really deep.

This is WAY off-topic, but we had a woman come to our school today to talk about abstinence. I thought she was gonna be really boring and nasty, but she was really cool. Pam Stenzel.

Nice, touching poem about two people who respect one another enough NOT to get laid...and then there's fear and no love there.

Awesome.

Later,

-paige :)

it confused me kinda.. the whoel he/she thing, but I like it

that had a nice rythm and repition. great poem! ^_^

SP

Nice! I really liked that! Definitely looking in to your stuff in the future!