Homesickness sucks, I know what you mean. I hope things pick up for you. Nice poem, very expressive.

Wow, i love this. It seems more like a song or a rap than a poem, but that's good. It's good for a poem to have rhythm and such. I just...Wow...dumbstruck and amazed. Thanks. Thank you VERY much.

Another sad, yet beautiful Poem. You have such talent. If this is true, I'm sorry.

Weird, sad, but with a great emotion expression.

Oh gosh this was so sad! Wonderfully written, but terribely sad. I so feel for you and the position you find yourself in. You wrote with such emotion, I felt as though I had grown up in this place too. You did an excellent job with this! I really enjoyed reading it. Keep it up! And God Bless!

Oh ya, I wanted to thank you for reviewing my story, "Becky". It was much appreciated!! It inspired me to post the next chapie! So ya thanks again. You are such the best!

That was beautifully written and so sad too. I like how you explain why and how you are feeling home sick before you actually say the two words. You create the feeling through out the entire poem. Nice Job.

*Silent Writer*

Thank you for your review on "The Riders of Ebony" i am glad that you are enjoying it so far =).

I liked this poem. You really had a lot of emotion in it...and every writer knows, you're somehow, if not directly, connected to your subject. Like I said, I liked your poem, had emotion, had heart, took guts...keep writing!

loved this poem, shows alot of emotion. it's not bad at all :)~infection~

hey! you reviewed me, so i thought i would read a poem of yours just to see. wow! i loved it, i grew up like that in an incriment of a way and it is like that. i liked it.

Hey..I'm talkin to you...and I'm reviewing you, hehe, this is fun...and this was good ^_^ Really good, actually. keep it up. --pammy-

The last line didn't really flow with the rest of the poem but I like the ending. It's a really good poem and it really portrays your feelings =) When I think of Jamaica all I think of is dreadlocks and those jellyfish from Sharktale... so I dunno why people would descriminate against you, but I'm a dumb teenaged kid. Ah well, whatever the case - you write good poetry.

I like this, its very real and very true.

thats a really great poem and i hope you get to return home some time soon!! keep writing your wonderful!

Really good, i like this alot, it flows really well. At times the ryhme seems a little forced but it dosn't matter because it flows so well you just carry on reading. Great job

That was good. Really got the whole meaning across. There's some grammar stuff, but eh. I really like this poem. Good job.

Gata de la Noche

P.S.- Thanks for the review!