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| Bi-curious George 2008-06-02 ch 1,  | abuseXDXDXD That was so funny at first! Muffin wars! And then getting tackled on the street! HAHA! That made me laugh so much... But then..eating a muffin after it's fallen onto the street? EW! That was nauseating. I'M GLAD I WASN'T THE ONLY ONE TO THINK SO. But it was so sweet when Charlie and Max kissed. SO SWEET. And then the last line... ""No, I suppose not," he said, and we slowly walked the rest of the way home, lingering at the stop lights to steal a kiss or two."- That was so cute it made me want to hhug some air! SO I DID! Oh it was so cute *hugs self* it was! I hope you won the competition -.- But yeah, 'twas ace! I'm totally favouriting this :D, and I'll get round to reading your bigger stories in a few days time when I've finished the last of my exams :D. Thanks for that story; it was ace! |
| chibibble 2008-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful in an ordinay way. You seem to captured the normalcy that happens in real life perfectly, and you've spun it into something that is completely your own. loveyou! |
| Kuradok Evangeline 2007-12-18 ch 1, | abusehaha this was great. very funny and random. > < U K, Evangeline. |
| Freak-of-Spade 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuse*emotional sob* that's so...pretty! *hugs* *wipes tears* *sniffs* i LOVE it! Can't you consider making it into a full story!! With loads of chapters dealing with the consequences and stuff?? yaye?? Please? |
| Jessica 2007-06-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was incredibly sweet! Even though I only knew these two for a single chapter, Max and Charlie have already grown on me! Very clever challenge; it's funny because I just finished eating the most ~delicious~ strawberry muffin on the face of this earth!...I love your attention to this one, as well as the hilarious, yet childish antics, that ensue between them! I like how you allude to the fact that they are 'straight' but then come to terms with their affection to each other; the transition was clever and appreciated in its subtlety. The entire story put a smile to my face! Good job! |
| sweetredink 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseCUTE~ |
| magalina 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abusecutecutecutecute!! |
| Lady E 2007-01-26 ch 1, | abuseIt's raining fluff! And I'm greedily gobbling every last bit. Can't resist the sweet taste as it melts on the sides of my mouth and transports me to an unknown paradise where boys share muffins and steal kisses at stoplights. I think I'm addicted. |
| Tin Whistle 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was absolutely adorable. I would love to see more pieces like this! |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseSo adorable! Muffins are awesome. I like that chase; very funny. And cute. Mucha diversion! ~Cat |
| Starlite nightfall:MOO MOO 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abuseCUTE! i like it lots...real cute! |
| YS 2005-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseNYA~ so good! this is a oneshot masterpiece! |
| Collar de Espinas 2005-11-23 ch 1, | abuseThat made my heart melt and just go 'Aw...' in that sappy way it does when I'm not careful! I loved that- beautifully written and you really brought out the characters' personalities in such a short time! Brilliant! |
| Kitsune Luver 2005-11-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. Do you know how great a writer you are??!! You're amazing. I mean, really, wow. |
| Amopet4 2005-10-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was... so cute! :-D |