i love this poem...it is umm..what do you call it... a sexy poem...it is great! kario

Desire’s that deep love,

Longs to merge two souls as One,—

Syncopated heart. -m-

really cute and romantic. I could feel the feelings emit from this poem. GREAT JOB! *GLOMP* :D ja bye bye!

Hm, nice - The title sums it up perfectly.

wonderfull beautiful. great job on this short piece, like it a lot.

i wish i knew what this feels like, but sadly i don't. :( but well written, full of emotion, nice descriptive word usage. i like this. very sweet. keep writing!

Powerful expression of passion, with so few words you create an intense picture that sums up the essence of passion in a nutshell. Great job.

Sizzling. XD Quite tantilizing verses. Almost makes me fall into the hunger itself. XDD

LOVE IT

This was romantic and slightly seductive. I loved it. Great care, D.

I'm more of a story person, but I decided to read your poem anyway. I like the fire and ice comparisons, ice melting over a fiery heart is nice imagery. Passion is a fire, an idea clearly expressed here. If you like horror try reading some of my stuff, I try to

This is definitely different from the most things that pop up in my author alert. But of course it's still brilliant, good word use, I don't see ravenous alot. I'm no good at doing short poems, I envy you. lol. Hope everything is going okay, and that's for the abundance of reveiws.

ANNA

Nice job with the calm presentation of this poem. I like the comparison of heart and love to something that can melt ice, and maybe that means love can overcome anything. I dunno. Anyway thanks for the review.

Beautiful description! So short and says it all- very true. Each word is selected and placed masterfully, and it flows perfectly... it's so good!

hum! nice kick on the word there!