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| myno 2005-03-07 ch 1,  | abusegreat imagery here. |
| catseyeview 2005-03-05 ch 1, | abusethe imagery is so tangible and dreamlike. Nice, nice work! |
| hellomister 2005-03-05 ch 1, | abuseAh. I love the descriptive nature of this. The repetition is subtle and effective. Love this. |
| Manuel Fajar 2005-03-03 ch 1, | abusesonoluminescent bubbles burble, inside temperature hotter than sun, some see hopes of fusion without limits, others see that sound converts to light waves, what do you think that's rising up heated? where do you think words will go when sun bursts? who do you think will outlive Gaia's term? when do you think finality converts? why do you think God put us here to feel? |
| Macca Lane 2005-03-01 ch 1, | abusethe repition is brilliant of the falling is brilliant you create a special kind of lathargic ethos |