i like it:)

Oh wow, this is so amazing. I can realy feel where you are coming from with this. Excellent job. Rock on! QueenVixta

whoah once again, i can relate to that! i have trouble opening up to people too! I'm more of the one that people can talk to, not the one who does the talking...okay done rambling...REALLY GOOD

well- i can relate. As to the word that means both to marry and to poison, it's gifta. Bitterheart is just my messed up play on sweetheart... lol. i have issues. :P

Sad in a lyrically beautiful sort of way. I think I've read about 5-6 of your pieces and I'm impressed how (and I appologize for the coffee bean approach to this) "in-tune" with the world around us all you are and how you mesh this rare quality into your work. I really hope you'll be able to share this with a vast majority of society someday! Trent

*raises hands* I'LL LISTEN! D (extra chins, tee hee). heh, really sweet, i understand where you're coming from, a lot of my friends have a hard time opening up. the thing is, ya just gotta let yourself go, go with your intuition and if it tells you to trust somebody, trust that person. heh, really cute poem, great job -

Sumi-chan; what you call love, i call pain.

pretty i like it i feel that way sometimes, like every time me and my best friend get talking. Our entire friendship rest on a sturdy foundation of shared misery, thanks for the review keep writeing

hm... well last night sure did bring up some stressing topics didn't it? LoLzz

I like the rhythem, it's also kind of sweet...