Oh my, all these reviews from you and I never paid you back! I'm sorry. I read through a few of your poems, but I found a bunch of mistakes so I went to some older ones. The title of this caught my eye; very creative, good job.

I like the line:

"frustrated fears eating the logic"

I didn't like how you didn't capitalize, but that's all your choice. Nice poem.

Gosh, you're rather addicted to FictionPress, aren't you? :P

Such a sad poem. Great job!

Twilight Starr

I wonder that all the time... Great poem.

a bit on the cnyical side but sadly i think al to of ti is very ute though i really hope that it isn't