i had to read this when i saw my name as the title. this is soo good though. i love it.:)

thank you. thank you so much for writing this. I almost did a double take when I saw that name. Oh my God, thank you.

Wow. Two amazingly beautiful things here: "your smile is so explosive" (never heard a smile referred to like that, but it's a great image) I also like "I won't have to live forever-anymore" a wonderful play between confidence and conceding... I was going to try to think of some "constructive criticism" but I couldn't think of any... nice writing!