The first phrase made me smile. Nice work. Keep writing!

Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

~Twilight Starr~

Wow! So dark and morbid... I LOVE IT! Especially the first one... I don't know... I love short yet deep poetry... You had some puncutation mistakes... but that was all... great job!

Hmm interesting slection of works. I enjoyed them thouroughly... keep writing!

Servatis a periculum, Servatis a maleficulm!

apocalypse, the 4 horsemen rite? letz c therez war, disease, famine, and death, i think, itz cool how u made it ur own, nice poem

Wow. Not much I can say here. . . good poem, though.

Great haiku. I also love ones about darkness of death.