whoa kDizz... this reminds me of weetzie bat. hehe... is that what it's about? well actually... it would be... umm... oh jeebus what was her name? her daughter with the wings? i don't remember... i need to read that again. GOOD JOB THO! you always have some really great unknown thing at the end... i like it.

beautiful descriptions

Very poetic. Nice imagery. It seems tragic in some way. Good work.*adds to favourites*

pretty good, but only between one and two lines actually spoke of her eyes. this took me off guard, but it's still well-written.

WOW. Absolutely, stunningly gorgeous descriptions.. great work.