this is inspirational! it brings hope.

nice work!

tuesday

Beautiful and uplifting. Bravo.

I love this one. I had a friend who tried to commit suicide. It's really hard to just assure them that they're loved.

_ it's surprisingly happy! Yay!

Loud voice, clear, and meaningful. Not much else to say- with my vocabulary, anyway.

That's a very good poem. I understand where you're coming from. Suicide is something that everyone has thought of at one time or another. The poem is great though. Great emotion and feeling. Nice rhythm, though it got choppy towards the middle, but it's not about the rhythm. The poem is about the content. Keep up the good work.

O.o i think i know what this is about :þ LoLz, i wonder if the other arsonists read this...hm LoLz

Wow..this poem reminds me of my friend Vicky. She's always talking sucide and I have to shake sense into her.

Wonderful poem

Thanks for the reviews on mine

I like it

Aw, this is a very nice, well written poem and it is very deep, you did a good job writing this, and adding the memories makes it even more deeper and more important, it really shows you care.

very deep. if i was going suicidal, i would want you as a friend!

so true, there may seem to be no hope in life, but we know theres no hope in death. nice poetry.