lol What's up with the swarm of numbers in the love section?! heheh hey you gotta slow this down or we might miss something...it seems like you restated the same subject in the last part of the poem. Apparently this was important to you when you wrote it.Excellent word choice with a simple rhythm. It flows very smoothly, and leaves you to think about what you just read, too (which isn't a bad thing).You should release some recent work, too. Maybe something with a name... give it some personality, ya' know? keep em coming if you have more, i'll be reading even if i don't review every one^^