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Leon the self absorbed 2007-02-09 . chapter 1
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Wow...good fic...can't say i didn't like the yaoi though...the yuri ehh...but my fav character is Poe!

mwehehehee...-locks poe in his closet-

see ya! ^^
noah 2006-11-15 . chapter 8
maxwell-sama!! i just started to like it!! that's just wrong. and i love jigsaw! and... you just had to say that about muraki, now i'm afriad of poe too. god. anyway, i like them together even though it's... wrong... in at least three different ways. i love you maxwell-sama.
Drops of Acid 2005-11-02 . chapter 8
"Random saying: "This is the best orgy I've ever been in!" That was me Saturday, to my Mistress...she took me to see The Rocky Horror Picture Show in theater and is was 'de-virgintized' so...it was a good night! And no, there were no real orgys."

HAHA OK BABE no the best orgy you will ever be in is a nipple rubbing one! I have done it so many times it is funny...I love quoting you! I am glad you like the poem...it is kinda weird...did you read the review before yours? I laughed at that! Lol I am soo loved...It might be a while though before I gete chess mate up...you know homework and stuff. I am working on it at school though so maybe in the next couple of hours it should be done...I LOVE YOU TO! -steals your bishi and runs- hahaha- I will hid him in one of my poems you will have to find him!-runs-

TATA! Asylum~
Callipygian 2005-09-27 . chapter 7
Wow, wow wow...so the hot lady that got killed was their teacher? and now they have a even hotter teacher?! some students get all the luck...then again...the school doesn't hire hot teachers for good reasons...
Callipygian 2005-09-27 . chapter 6
Poor lady all she wanted was love with a especially hot man...oh well. I love how Sin has to work at a restaurant it speaks to me...cept i used to work with fast food...*shutter* never again, i was hit on by a man who liked lil boys...but now i just work sometimes at my friends, anywayz i hope u don't cut this story off, or i'll harm you
Callipygian 2005-09-27 . chapter 5
Wow, its awesome how much your characters act like me and my friends, when ever one of us figure something stupid out we always say "YEAH! you get a gold star!" and we're stupid like...that...as you can tell by me n_n I read some more, bye bye
Callipygian 2005-09-27 . chapter 3
K, so i'm alittle late reviewing but ** it, i still love your story(s) Your writting is magic and brings grins to my face, i will read on...hehe distraction in classes, ** reminds me of my social studies class...** cutest ** guy ever sittin next to me! why?!!?! i'm failing of course n_n he's got green messy hair! a lip ring and...ok. i'll stop...stopping...
Flamevixen 2005-06-16 . chapter 1
Hello Morbid Maxwell! I was once Flamefox, but I changed it to something more me, a sly and sexy (in my opinion, guys don't ask me out *cries*) penname! Anyway, I didn't read the story (not allowed to read M stuff), but I wanted to thank you for reviewing my poems. I don't get a ton of reviews for my stuff, so I love it when people drop a review! So Thanks, and hope you read more!
noebody 2005-05-18 . chapter 1
The bit about the worms was funny
Mizz - ASSome - KiTtY 2005-05-17 . chapter 2
Okay, let me ask you more thing... why is everything Yoai?
Mizz - ASSome - KiTtY 2005-05-17 . chapter 1
Hey its me, Mirror-The-GothGoddess, i am a GIRL, and i was possesed when i made Why Me? and All night long but if you like those read VARA AND THE RED DRAGON, that is one of my other stories and im finished it too! i have lots of other stories too and i have finished alot of chapters, i just have to put them down. I AM NOT HORNY Mirror-The-GothGoddess
StraightJacketPhil 2005-05-13 . chapter 8
First of all, thank you very much for your reviews of Amnesia and especially The Retardation of America, I really appreiciate reviews.

As for this, the lack of lesbian action did concern me some, but at least there was plenty of sharp dialogue to occupy me until then! Interesting, provocative dialogue seems to come naturally to you, and easily distinguishes the characters. There were some periods at the end of some lines of dialogue that should've been commas, and once or twice I think you changed from past to present tense for like, one or two sentences, but other than that, it was good!

PS-I'll be sure to give you a second review on a different story at some point, but I gotta run right now.

StraightJacketPhil
Callipygian 2005-05-09 . chapter 2
Yay! Chapter! I want to read more, and the bell is about to ring so I must leave to my next prison. But this story is so cute in a dark twisted way. I luv
Mephistophilis 2005-05-08 . chapter 8
^_^ no prob! I'll be waiting... and talkin about waitin, sowy i haven't posted the 3rd chap... skull's ending and they'r drownin me, and i have the hugest writer's block... >.>; I kno... i really should post... but i write little bits when ever i get the chance!! T-T Gomen! *bows*
Mephistophilis 2005-05-08 . chapter 7
Come now!! It did not suck!! It's good! The Yuri is starting!! Sh!! *grabs the popcorn, coke and a handful of Pocky* Ready when u are!!

Yes! I like Yuurei!! Go Rei-kun!! Kill 'em all, and let 'em burn in the Lowest pits o' Hell!

*blinks* Why would u say that u r unoved?? Q ,Q I love u... *stretches arms, askin 4 a hug* Hug?? *big puppy eyes*
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