Wow Mallory, that's really good. The rythem is odd but the EMO is awesome!

*Amber*

Oh. My. Buddha. THIS IS AWESOME! THIS IS, in my proffesional opinion (lol), YOUR BEST POEM! AND DAMN GIRL! you ARE gonna win!

Oh that's cute. Easy to relate. Nice imagery, its like I can actually see her and whatch her as all this happens. Keep it up!

i like the lsat line.. it has hope to it.. great poem.. so true about so many people and brilliantly written.. nice rhyming too

wow. that was good. its probably even better than mine. My poem is I'm only a child, if you want to read it.I don't know how others will rate it, since its the first thing that i put on here.

wow... I love it... people, just because they have to strong and appear so doesn't mean that they really are. you showed that wonderfully with great imagry and emotion in a smooth, flowing poem. I really like it *adds poem to favourites*