aweomsely beautiful! brilliants! very evry every part of it i loved so much. so sad I REALLY LIKED THE LAST TWO LINES So where have all the flowers gone?

They lay broken across the lawn. AWESOME and so true... they say you're a coward if you won't go to war but it takes more guts to fight a local policeman and your country alone than it takes to fight a faceless enemy with the support of your govt... great job

wow great poem! it reminds me of this book i read that was called "Where have all the flowers gone?" another amazing poem

well... good poem i like it i dont understand all of it but thats a good thing some times soo* shrugs* its a cool thing to write about

This is a very strong piece of poetry here. Keep up the good work!