Aw! This is very cute _

Oh. My. Gosh. I don't know what to say, that's how hilarious it was! I am seriously about to laugh my head off!

Rhyming seemed a little forced in bits, but it was nice overall. Liked the bit about her being allergic! :)

Different. Everyone is intitled to be different if they so choose.

now that was funny! what were their kids like sarrots? or craberries? lol. your really creative. that was very funny.

HAHAHAHAHAH! LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLO! HAHAHAHAHAH! I loved it, I loved it, I loved it! Wow! This was just so cute. I cannot stop laughing! HAHAHAHA! Gosh this was funny. I LOVED how you described the carrot. You were actually making me think he was hot! OK well not really. Excellent job. You should go pro! Send these to a magazine or somethin!

I love your poems, they're amazing!

haha that is the best! ) and thank you for the review!

That's funny. And clever. I never knew a blue strawberry but I'd like to meet one. LoL.

Kudos, Michelle

well that started fabulously but i think yoiu were losin gyour rhytm and yur rhyme scheme towards the end. Though that could hsve just been me _ .great poem

hahahahahahaha! so kawaii XD! Also reminds me of coconuts _ Also, if you have the time, would you mind looking at some of my work? I'm a Christian too so I'd love to know what you think n_n

CB414

this was interesting and funny, i liked it

Hey, I love the way you write D It rhymes, flows, and is humourous too Coolio! Keep it up!

Very good. I enjoyed that! A strawberry and a carrot... what an odd pair!

aww so cute! what would a strawberry and carrot have for a baby Oo? xD I really love this though! Keep up the humor!