where ever it came from, it's beautiful, i like the two lines, "capturing a ballerina's story in pretty calligraphy/a blackbird against the white sky" i dont know, it's just, i really like, excellent job

Very, very beautiful. I love all of the imagery you used.

In the space of a few lines you've been able to create many striking images. I particularly loved the line "capturing a ballerina's story in pretty calligraphy", it's such a unique choice of language. Great piece, and thankyou for the reviews :)

*cosmo-queen*

The idea of this is simple, but your imagery is excellent.

beautiful beautiful piece. i love the imagery and diction. fantastic writing. you really have a way with words and using them to paint vivid images. great job. keep up the awesome work! ^_^

Simple, short, brillant, unique and beautiful. Those are the best words to describe this. ^-^ Lovely as always keep up the good work!!

!~* Noelle *~!

... I... LOVE your writing! it's so unique, so different, so random and beatufiul and abstract all at once. just brilliant work. Excellent job!

aesthetically and emotionally beautiful. lovely imagery & syntax.

Hey. I like it :)...it's really simple, short but it's still great, like all your stuff...it's brilliant...love the idea of 'melodies of pens scribbling over paper'. Love, Mia