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| Pink Sparrow 2005-11-19 ch 1, | abuseHmm, again interesting topic. I like the repeating of the line 'I'm only a child' It's a powerful poem and direct adn to the point... hmm... I can't think of anything to say, i've never acctually read a poem like this before. Good work. |
| Geno 2005-03-04 ch 1, | abusevery long poem. quite powerful too. I like it.I'll make a deal with you. you give reviews to my parodies, I'll give reviews to yours when you make them. this way we both get reviews. (I have 32 right now) |