aw, that was so good!

marionette/lexa

It is a lovely poem.

This is a very moving poem, i remember your grandad from when we were younger and at his house when he used to tell us stories and everything dont know if you remember that but i still do!.Those were the days!..and i remember him going out my road each day to those sheep!! this brings back memories of those days and i cant really express how much i liked this poem 'cause id feel that it would be a bit of an understatement if i tried!! but you did him justice man, he would be proud!! Keep it up...later.

your cousin Richard.

This moved me deeply esp. after reading the line "and then - you closed your eyes - and slept" It's simplicity conveys great sadness.

ah another poem on same topic as the first. nicely put, again, sorries for your loss and i wish your family the best. nice writing, very talented

Aww that's sweet. I liked this, as always, I am in awe ^_^. Well done! Yup, I got busy with school too, so I can relate, so it's alright you haven't "dropped by" ^_^. I"m sorry about your Grandfather, hope you're doing ok. Till next review,-Rae

Sorrow can be a powerful muse. I'm sorry that you had to go through such pain in order to find this poem, but I think your grandfather would be glad tha you did. It was lovely, truely.

keith, this is beautful. I am sorry for you loss. Your grandfather seems like a wonderful soul and i am saw he was very proud of you. :)

Sorry for your loss. This was a beautiful poem.

this is a beautiful tribute, he would be proud (anyone would). nice.

Han.

beautiful and heartfelt. so impressive!

Wow, this is really nice.

Very sweet. I'm sorry for your loss. Your grandpa would be proud of this.

Oh wow, this was so beautiful I am crying right now, I dont know what I would do if I lost my grandfather. I'm so sorry for your loss :( Let your memories of him bring only happiness, not sadness. Thank you for writing this poem, it was breathtaking to read.

Love and lots of admiration,

Anna

okay, i dont know where to start.. this poem is truly beautiful, you're an amazingly talented writer. you describe everything perfect and this speaks to me in a way too.. coz it reminds me of last year at this time when my gradmum died. and i can tell there is a lot of emotion behind this.. i love it, this is going on my fav list, and its my fav poem... and i just want you to know, i am so, so sorry.. and if he was your grandad i know he was an amzing person. and i want you to know that im here if you want to talk. i love you.

love ~zai~