Interesting way to get a pen name. Well written as also. I wish any dance I ever went to could be like that. :) Nice story.

:de vries:

Hmm, I like short stories like this. Awesome. It leaves me WONDERING what happened to Kathleen. Pretty name, btw. I wish my name was Kathleen. Alas, it's not, though. I've got a short and stubby name...

Keep writing!

Later,

-paige :)